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The given diagrams display the stages of making ketchup process.

The given diagrams display the stages of making ketchup process. ymKd

The given diagrams display the stages of making ketchup process. Overall, the process divided by 15 different stages which start with picking tomatoes from plants and culminating in using for burger preparation. To begin with farms, the tomatoes used to make ketchup are picked from farms and carried in baskets. This tomatoes are then sorted to use the best tomatoes in order to increase the katchup quality after transferred to factory. Following this, in factors tomatoes are cleaned by removed some parts such as stalks, skin and seeds. After that, all tomatoes are put in container and crushed. At this point salt, vinegar and sugar are added then tomatoes mash is boiled with high temperature subsequent by left about 2 hours to reach the suitable temperature. In the subsequent stage, the ketchup canned in bottles which are then labeled next be examined by the controller. Katchup bottles are packed into boxes which are loaded them onto lorries. After ketchupe boxes are arrived to supermarket bought to customers. Finally ketchup used with hamburger and fries.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagrams display the stages of making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 process. Overall
, the process divided by 15 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with picking tomatoes from plants and culminating in using for burger preparation.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with farms, the tomatoes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
are picked
 from farms and carried in baskets. Did you mean "these"?These
This
 tomatoes are then sorted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the best tomatoes in order to increase the Possible spelling mistake found.ketchupmatchup
katchup
 quality after transferred to factory.

Following this, in factors tomatoes are cleaned
 by removed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 parts such as stalks, skin and seeds. After that, all tomatoes are put
 in container and crushed. At this point salt, vinegar and sugar are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 then tomatoes mash is boiled
 with high temperature subsequent by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 about 2 hours to reach the suitable temperature.

In the subsequent stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 canned in bottles which are then labeled next
be examined
 by the controller. Possible spelling mistake found.KetchupMatchup
Katchup
 bottles are packed
 into boxes which are loaded
 them onto lorries. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
Possible spelling mistake found.ketchupketchup e
ketchupe
 boxes are arrived
 to supermarket This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 to customers. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 with hamburger and fries. 