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The two graphs show the main source of energy in the usa in the 1980and in the 1990

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The pie chart illustrates the information about the main sources of energy in the USA in the year 1980 to 1990. As a presented into the chart, oil produced a large number of energy in the USA which was recorded at 42%, however it least in nuclear power has been shown that 5%only. There was a little difference between the natural gas additionally coal stood at 26% plus 22% respectively. Moving further into the chart, 10% nuclear energy was produced by USA and half percent of hydroelectric power. most of the energy consumed by the USA of oil stood at 33%, while there was a minor differences between the natural gas and caol. After overall analysis, in the both charts main source of energy was oil, whereas least of hydroelectric power.
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illustrates the information about the main sources of
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in the USA in the year 1980 to 1990. As a presented into the
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, oil produced
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in the USA which
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coal stood at 26% plus 22%
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, 10% nuclear
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was produced
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and half percent of hydroelectric power.
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consumed by the USA of oil stood at 33%, while there was a minor differences between the natural gas and
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overall
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main source of
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was oil, whereas least of hydroelectric power.
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IELTS academic The two graphs show the main source of energy in the usa in the 1980and in the 1990

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