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The graph shows the information about the international conferences in three capital cities in 1980 – 2010.

The graph shows the information about the international conferences in three capital cities in 1980 – 2010. YoNB
The line graph compares three capital cities in terms of the number of international conferences hosted between 1980 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the number of international conferences in City A and City B declined over this period. In contrast, in City C, the number of such conferences saw a rapid increase until the year 2000. In 1980, there were 35 international conferences in City A, compared with 30 in City B. Despite similar fluctuations, these figures then decreased overall, until, in 2005, both cities hosted 27 conferences. By 2010, conferences in City B had overtaken the number in City A, with 26 and 24 international conferences respectively. City C held no international conferences in 1980. However, it was the venue for 20 conferences in 1990, and by the year 2000, this figure had risen dramatically to 35. The number then remained higher than in the other two cities, although it fell slightly to 31 conferences by the end of the period.
The line graph compares three capital
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in terms of the
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number
of
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international
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conferences
hosted between 1980 and 2010.

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, it is
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that the
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of
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international
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conferences
in City A and City B declined over this period.
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, in City C, the
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number
of such
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conferences
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saw
a rapid increase until the year 2000. In 1980, there were 35
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international
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conferences
in City A, compared with 30 in City B. Despite similar fluctuations, these figures then decreased
overall
, until, in 2005, both
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cities
hosted 27
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conferences
. By 2010,
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in City B had overtaken the
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in City A, with 26 and 24
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international
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conferences
respectively
.

City C held no
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conferences
in 1980.
However
, it was the venue for 20
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conferences
in 1990, and by the year 2000, this figure had risen
dramatically
to 35. The
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number
then remained higher than in the other two
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, although it fell
slightly
to 31
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conferences
by the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the information about the international conferences in three capital cities in 1980 – 2010.

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