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The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Xm2O
The chart represent about American spending samples varies from 1966 to 1996. As meticulously shown in the charts, at the beginning of the period computers expenditure made up smallest part of the chart, while food spending was the significant part in chart. In comparison, at the end of the period cars became the largest disbursement part and lowest spending was made by books. Spending on computers accounted for just 1% in 1966, and it experienced a more than nine-fold increase to one-ten in 1996. expenditure on restaurants it doubled, climbing from 7% to 14%. At the starting off the period, spending on cars made up 23% in 1966. However, it had a drastic growth of 45% in 1996. Food, which comprised almost highest spending in 1966, but it had decreased gradually to 14% in 1996. Besides, the proportion of salary spent on furniture was10% and it slightly two-fold dropped to 8% in 1996. Following the almost same in petrol spending was comprised of 9% and it bit fell to 1% and accounted as a 8% in 1996. Likewise, money spent on books was reported as a 6% and it had highly decreased to 1% in 1996. To conclude, money spending on cars as well as computers and eating out percentages increased, while expenditure dropped on food and books.
The chart represent about American
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spending
samples varies from 1966 to

1996.

As
meticulously
shown in the charts, at the beginning of the

period
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computers
expenditure made up smallest part of the chart,

while food
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spending
was the significant part in chart. In

comparison, at the
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end
of the period cars became the largest

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disbursement
part and lowest
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spending
was made
by books.

Spending on computers accounted for
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just
1% in 1966, and it

experienced a more than nine-fold increase to one-ten in

1996. expenditure on restaurants it doubled, climbing from 7%
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to


14%. At the starting off the period,
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spending
on cars made
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up


23% in 1966.
However
, it had a drastic growth of 45% in 1996.

Food, which comprised almost highest
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spending
in 1966,
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but
it

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had
decreased
gradually
to 14% in 1996.
Besides
, the proportion

of salary spent on furniture was10% and it
slightly
two-fold

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dropped
to 8% in 1996. Following the almost same in
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petrol


spending
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was comprised of
9% and it bit fell to 1% and accounted

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as
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a
8% in 1996.
Likewise
, money spent on books
was reported


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as
a 6% and it had
highly
decreased to 1% in 1996.

To conclude
, money
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spending
on cars
as well
as computers and

eating out percentages increased, while expenditure dropped on

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food
and books.
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IELTS academic The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

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