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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. K6R6
The diagram illustrates the micro-level of information gathered by Australian Bureau of Meteorology about the weather concerning to bring out the accurate predictions. The data can be collected from the three mediums, such as Sattelite, Radar and Drifting buoy and the information is acquired from these mediums are in the form of Sattelite photo, Radar screen and Synoptic chart respectively. The data, then examined by the department of Analysis and forecasting to produce precise predictions on the weather. After the inspection on the information is done, it is prepared to be able to broadcast the predictions on the broadcasting mediums. As soon as the data has been organized for broadcasting, the broadcast mediums is used to present the information to the audience. The broadcasting mediums are TV, Radio and Recorded announcements. The report is presented with the help of these mediums. This how the predictions of weather is made by Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
The diagram illustrates the micro-level of
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information
gathered by Australian Bureau of Meteorology about the weather concerning to bring out the accurate predictions.

The data can
be collected
from the three
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mediums
, such as
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Sattelite
, Radar and Drifting buoy and the
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information
is acquired
from these
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mediums
are in the form of
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Sattelite
photo, Radar screen and Synoptic chart
respectively
.
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The
data, then examined by the department of Analysis and forecasting to produce precise predictions on the weather. After the inspection on the
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information
is done
, it
is prepared
to be able to broadcast the predictions on the broadcasting mediums.

As
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soon
as the data has
been organized
for broadcasting, the broadcast
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mediums
is
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used
to present the
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information
to the audience. The broadcasting
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mediums
are TV, Radio and Recorded announcements. The report
is presented
with the
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help
of these
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mediums
. This how the predictions of weather
is made
by Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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