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ratio of households who owned accommodations and rented accommodations in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The bar chart illustrates the ratio between families who owned and rented their houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, there was an increasing trend of families who lived in their own house while it can be seen in the figure that the proportion of rented house for living was declining. Furthermore, the percentage of both figures was similar in 1971 and experienced a moderate bounce back in 2011. The ratio of family living in rented houses was at the highest at about 78% in 1918 nearly four times than the percentage of one living in owned houses and then it fell gradually until became balance at 50% for both figures in 1971. Next, it reached the lowest point at 31% in 2001 and rose slightly by 5% according to the data in 2011 that was shown in the graph. On the other hand, the proportion of households who lived in owned houses had an upward trend from around 22 per cent in 1971 until peaked at 68 per cent in 2001 and declined a little by 5 % in 2011.
The bar chart illustrates the ratio between families who
owned
and rented their
houses
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall
, there was an increasing trend of families who
lived
in their
own
house
while it can be
seen
in the figure that the proportion of rented
house
for living was declining.
Furthermore
, the percentage of both figures was similar in 1971 and experienced a moderate bounce back in 2011.

The ratio of family living in rented
houses
was at the highest at about 78% in 1918
nearly
four
times
than the percentage of one living in
owned
houses
and then it fell
gradually
until became balance at 50% for both figures in 1971.
Next
, it reached the lowest point at 31% in 2001 and rose
slightly
by 5% according to the data in 2011 that
was shown
in the graph.

On the other hand
, the proportion of households who
lived
in
owned
houses
had an upward trend from around 22 per cent in 1971 until peaked at 68 per cent in 2001 and declined a
little
by 5 % in 2011.
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IELTS academic ratio of households who owned accommodations and rented accommodations in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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