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The given diagram shows the new planned structure in a town. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The rendered diagram illustrates the information about the changes in the infrastructure of the Islip center. Overall, it is conclusively obvious that the number of amenities will be more than the present time, however, the majority of them will be placed between the road. Primarily, it is candid that the number of shops is present on both sides of the main road, whereas the park is situated on the southeast corner of the current map. In addition, school is located on the west side of housing, while the countryside is placed in the northeast direction of the school. Furthermore, the main street will be converted into the dual carriageway, whilst the location for the school will be same. Further, the number of northern shops will be demolished for the best station on west corner, shopping hall and car park in the center, and new housing on east corner. Although, on the side side of them, there will be a pathway, which will be used by the pedestrian individuals. Nevertheless, the size of a park will be reduced and located on east side of housing as well as new housing. Ultimately, the south shops will be remained at same position.
The rendered diagram illustrates the information about the
changes
in the infrastructure of the
Islip
center.

Overall
, it is
conclusively
obvious that the number of amenities will be more than the present time,
however
, the majority of them will
be placed
between the road.

Primarily
, it is candid that the number of shops is present on both
sides
of the main road, whereas the park
is situated
on the southeast corner of the
current
map.
In addition
, school
is located
on the west side of housing, while the countryside
is placed
in the northeast direction of the school.

Furthermore
, the main street will
be converted
into the dual carriageway, whilst the location for the school will be same.
Further
, the number of northern shops will
be demolished
for the best station on west corner, shopping hall and car park in the center, and new housing on east corner. Although, on the
side side
of them, there will be a pathway, which will be
used
by the pedestrian individuals.
Nevertheless
, the size of a park will be
reduced
and located on east side of housing
as well
as new housing.
Ultimately
, the south shops will
be remained
at same position.
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IELTS academic The given diagram shows the new planned structure in a town.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
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