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The Diagram shows the life cycle of a lady bird and the description of its anatomy . Write a report detailing the information provided.

The Diagram shows the life cycle of a lady bird and the description of its anatomy. Write a report detailing the information provided. QwN7X
The first diagram illustrates the stages in the life of a lady Bird. The life cycle of lady bird consist of four steps. The life starts from egg stage and goes through the two stages before finally becoming an adult lady Bird. With regard to his anatomy the lady birds have seven main body parts. The life cycle of lady bird started when adult bird lays eggs on leaves and the egg stage is for 2-5 days after that the eggs produce larva and the larva stage is consist of 21 days from larva the pupa is formed and this stage has last seven days, afterwards this pupa develops and mature into an adult lady bird. Furthermore, the anatomy of lady bird has 7 main body parts. The head consist of two antennas, eyes and pronotum. The trunk of lady bird is covered with red elytra. The wings and abdomen is lie under the red elytra, this lady bird has six legs with three of each side.
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diagram illustrates the
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stages
in the
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life
of a
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lady
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Bird
. The
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life
cycle of
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lady
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bird
consist of four steps.
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The
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life
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starts
from egg
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stage
and goes through the two
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stages
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before
finally
becoming an adult
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lady
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Bird
. With regard to his anatomy the
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lady
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birds
have seven main body parts.

The
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life
cycle of
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lady
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bird
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started
when adult
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bird
lays eggs on
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leaves
and the egg
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stage
is for 2-5 days after that the eggs produce larva and the larva
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stage
is consist of 21 days from larva the pupa
is formed
and this
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stage
has last seven days, afterwards this pupa develops and mature into an adult
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lady
bird.

Furthermore
, the anatomy of
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lady
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bird
has 7 main body parts. The head consist of two antennas, eyes and
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pronotum
. The trunk of
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lady
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bird
is covered
with red
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elytra
.
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wings and abdomen is lie under the red
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elytra
, this
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lady
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bird
has six legs with three of each side.
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IELTS academic The Diagram shows the life cycle of a lady bird and the description of its anatomy. Write a report detailing the information provided.

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  American English
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167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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