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The table gives information about the changes in the population of ten world-leading countries in 2019 and its estimation for 2100. Looking from overall perspective, it is clear that the ranking of countries given is forecast to change significantly over the period. Looking into details, in 2019 the ranking of both USA and Indonesia was not nowhere near as high as China, with the former having 331 people and the latter accounting for 274. By contrast, China's ranking was the highest in this year, standing at 1. 439 which made it to the top. Projection suggests China's population will experience a significant drop, plummeting from 1. 439 to 941. A further interesting point to note that Although the quantity of population of both India and Nigeria was lower than that of China in 2019, with 1. 380 and 206 respectively, the amount of people of those countries is expected to show an increase by 2100, making up 1. 551 and 730, despite being one of the the top ten countries after China. What is remarkable about three countries is that in spite of the fact that Bangladesh, Russia and Mexico were in the rank of top ten countries, forecast shows that they wil be replaced by Ethiopia, Tanzania and Brazil, with the former having 212 in the position of Bangladesh.
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in the population of ten world-leading
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in 2019 and its estimation for 2100.

Looking from
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that the ranking of
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Looking into
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, in 2019 the ranking of both USA and Indonesia was
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near as high as China, with the former having 331
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and the latter accounting for 274. By contrast, China's ranking was the highest in this year, standing at 1. 439 which made it to the top. Projection suggests China's population will experience a significant drop, plummeting from 1. 439 to 941.

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further
interesting point to note that Although the quantity of population of both India and Nigeria was lower than that of China in 2019, with 1. 380 and 206
respectively
, the amount of
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is
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an increase by 2100, making up 1. 551 and 730, despite being one of
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top ten
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after China.

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the fact that Bangladesh, Russia and Mexico were in the rank of top ten
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, forecast
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by Ethiopia, Tanzania and Brazil, with the former having 212 in the position of Bangladesh.
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