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the given diagram shows the energy wave machine and its locations

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The given diagram illustrates about how the structure of a wave-energy machine and its location options. Overall, there are two chambers on which one chambers has turbines and the other chamber has the water. There is several location options for the installation of wave energy machine. In wave-energy machine there are two chambes, in first chamber two turbines are installed. First turbine allows the outside air flow and air flow from water. In second turbine air flow from the water is passed and leaves through first turbine. On the contrary, the air flow from out is passed through outer turbine and leaves through inner turbine. Thus, by rotating of the turbines provides the electricity. There are different locations for the installation of the wave-energy machines. The location where large waves are formed gives high output and high installation costs. Whereas, wave-energy machines that are constructed at small waves provides low output with low installation costs.
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diagram illustrates about how the structure of a wave-energy
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machine
and its
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location
options.

Overall
, there are two
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chambers
on which one
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chambers
has
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turbines
and the other
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chamber
has the water. There is several
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location
options for the installation of wave energy machine.

In wave-energy
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machine
there are two
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chambes
, in
first
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chamber
two
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turbines
are installed
.
First
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turbine
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allows
the outside
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air
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flow
and
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air
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flow
from water. In second
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turbine
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air
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flow
from the water
is passed
and
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leaves
through
first
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turbine
.
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, the
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air
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flow
from out
is passed
through outer
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turbine
and
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leaves
through inner
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turbine
.
Thus
, by rotating of the
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turbines
provides the electricity.

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different
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locations
for the installation of the wave-energy
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machines
. The
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location
where large waves
are formed
gives high output and high installation costs.
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, wave-energy
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that
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at
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waves provides low output with low installation costs.

IELTS academic the given diagram shows the energy wave machine and its locations

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