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The given diagram shows the different stages of how water evaporates and fall again. in ocean

The given diagram shows the different stages of how water evaporates and fall again. in ocean Nmmjg
The given diagram illustrate the different stage of how water evaporate, travel distance through wind and falls as rain on ocean. The diagram shows the different stages of how water evaporates and fall again in ocean as four main steps are shown on figure, At first step the water evaporates with the help of sunlight which make water vapoure and form a cloud the same cloud travel with the help of wind, vapour cools down with the transpiration from by plant and trees at second stage the water vapour cools down it lakes form of rain and falls down on surface of land with the help of gravity. At third stage, in the cycle, rain water travel through different paths, some of them fall on river or lake. Some portion of it goes underground flows into lakes river and seas. At final stage the ranny water flow towards sea through river and reach to sea.
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evaporate, travel distance through wind and
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as rain on ocean. The diagram
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again in ocean as four main steps
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evaporates with the
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of sunlight which
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and form a cloud the same cloud travel with the
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of wind,
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vapour
cools down with the transpiration from by plant and trees at second
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the
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cools down it lakes form of rain and
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down on surface of land with the
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of gravity. At third
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, in the cycle, rain
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travel through
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on river or lake.
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portion of it goes underground flows into lakes river and seas. At final
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flow towards sea through river and reach to sea.
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IELTS academic The given diagram shows the different stages of how water evaporates and fall again. in ocean

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