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The bar graph depicts the information about gender literacy in five nations

The bar graph depicts the information about gender literacy in five nations jVDDX
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as compos to other Country whereas the minimum proportion was
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IELTS academic The bar graph depicts the information about gender literacy in five nations

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158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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