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The given diagram illustrates the process of recycling plastic.

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The given diagram illustrates the process of recycling plastic. There are two process of this diagram. One is the way of plastic is recycled and another is where it it will come if it is not renewed. In the frist process, there are six stages and in the seconds, there are four steps. The process number one begins with the plastic products are sold in a shop and then, people come and buy also use them. After that, there are two different way to process them. One is throwing them away and they become rubbish. At last, they will be taken to the landfill where people collect rubbishs. However, the another way is collecting all the bottles and things made by plastic. Then, getting them to the sorting house to classify them. Next to, the plastic which have been sorted is delivered to the factory to process and become brand new products. Last, the recycled plastics will return the shop to display. Overall, these pictures show us the way plastics garage is processed. And recycling is better than throwing them away because of enviromental problems and protecting the Earth
The
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given
diagram illustrates the
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process
of recycling
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plastic
. There are two
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process
of this diagram. One is the way of
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plastic
is recycled
and another is where
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it it
will
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come
if it is not renewed. In the
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frist
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process
, there are six stages and in the seconds, there are four steps.

The
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process
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number
one
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begins
with the
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plastic
products
are sold
in a shop and then,
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people
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come
and
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buy
also
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use
them. After that, there are two
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different
way to
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process
them. One is throwing them away and they become rubbish. At last, they will
be taken
to the landfill where
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people
collect
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rubbishs
.
However
, the another way is collecting all the bottles and things made by
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plastic
. Then, getting them to the sorting
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house
to classify them.
Next
to, the
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plastic
which have
been sorted
is delivered
to the factory to
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process
and become
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brand new
products. Last, the recycled
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plastics
will return the shop to display.

Overall
, these pictures
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show
us the way
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plastics
garage
is processed
. And recycling is better than throwing them away
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because
of
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enviromental
problems and protecting the
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Earth
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the process of recycling plastic.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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