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The given tabular depicts the data of Australian kids who were born to mothers aged between 40 and 44 during 1981. Overall, as can be seen in the chart, the number of kids that the women of different ages from 40 to 44 gave birth to one child witnessed the highest change in 2006 than they did in 1981 but in the case of more children, the number of children was on the decline. Looking at the data more closely, the percentages of births for one, two, three, and four were about 7. 6%, just under 30%, 27. 4%, and 27. 6% respectively at the start. In 1986, the percentage of single-parent families grew slightly to 8. 7%. The percentage of women having two children grew, whereas the percentage of women having three or four children fell. After ten years, in 1996, the number of children born to women aged 40 to 44 grew in cases of one and two children, but dropped in other categories. Finally, in 2006, the percentages of children born to families with three or more children fell, while the percentages of children born to families with one or two children grew. In 1981, a small fraction of women had no children; by 2006, it had risen to 15. 9%
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tabular depicts the data of Australian kids who
were born
to mothers aged between 40 and 44 during 1981.

Overall
, as can be
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seen
in the chart, the number of kids that the
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women
of
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different
ages from 40 to 44 gave birth to one child witnessed the highest
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change
in 2006 than they did in 1981
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but
in the case of more
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children
, the number of
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children
was on the decline.

Looking at the data more
closely
, the
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percentages
of births for one, two, three, and four were about 7. 6%,
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under 30%, 27. 4%, and 27. 6%
respectively
at the
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start
. In 1986, the
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percentage
of single-parent families
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grew
slightly
to 8. 7%. The
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percentage
of
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women
having two
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children
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grew
, whereas the
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percentage
of
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women
having three or four
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children
fell.

After ten years, in 1996, the number of
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children
born to
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women
aged 40 to 44
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grew
in cases of one and two
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children
,
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but
dropped in other categories.
Finally
, in 2006, the
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percentages
of
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children
born to families with three or more
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children
fell, while the
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percentages
of
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children
born to families with one or two
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children
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grew
. In 1981, a
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small
fraction of
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women
had no
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; by 2006, it had risen to 15. 9%
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