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The given pie charts provide information about changes in UK spending patterns from 1966 to 1996. Overall at the beginning of the period food made up biggest proportion, however, at the end of the time car users increased. In both years compurets and books took small fraction of graph. In 1966 cars were about one-forth of household spending, although it reached to approximately half. Over the following 30 years restaurants were doubled. Computers were mere 1% in 1966, yet it grew around 10% and it made one-tenth. From the figure we can see decreases in some sectors between 1966 to 1996Food made up biggest percentage (44%). Nevertheless it faced dramatically decline (14%). Also book readers were 7% it reduced around 5%. Between 1966 to 1996 furniture and pertol saw a minimal drop mere 1%.

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given
 pie charts provide information about This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in UK spending patterns from 1966 to 1996. Overall
 at the beginning of the period food made up biggest proportion, however
, at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the time car users increased. In both years Possible spelling mistake found.computerscomparescompresscomputescomportscomperes
compurets
 and books took This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 fraction of graph. In 1966 cars were about one-forth of household spending, although it reached to approximately half. Over the following 30 years restaurants were doubled
. Computers were mere 1% in 1966, yet
 it grew around 10% and it made one-tenth. From the figure we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 decreases in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sectors between 1966 to 1996Food made up biggest percentage (44%). Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Nevertheless,
Nevertheless
 it faced dramatically
 decline (14%). Also
 book readers were 7% it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 around 5%. Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "Between 1966 and 1996".Between 1966 and 1996
Between 1966 to 1996
 furniture and Possible spelling mistake found.petrol
pertol
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a minimal drop mere 1%. 