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The given table chart illustrates how many the proportion of children ever born to 40-44 years old women in Australia from 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006.

The given table chart illustrates how many the proportion of children ever born to 40-44 years old women in Australia from 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006. palAd
The given table chart illustrates how many the proportion of children ever born to 40-44 years old women in Australia from 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006. Overall, the number of aged 40-44 years had two children took up the highest proportion during this time frame and the familied had either one child or none recorded a gradual increase from 1981 to 2006, while this number significantly decreased for the women same age who had two or more children. In 1981, the proportion of women in 40-44 years old who had no children was 8. 5% and in 1986 this percentage increased slightly and in the neighbourhood of one in ten. The women of the same age group with one child were 7. 6% in 1981 and reached to 8. 7% 5 years later. The percentages of women who witnessed a fall in the same age category with two, four and more children were much higher approximately a quarter. With a 10 years interval, the percentage reached to over 15% for childless women while it reached to 13% for women with 1 child. The percentage of women with 2 children had very little change while the percentage for three of four children decreased over time.
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ever born to 40-44 years
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in Australia from 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006.

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took up the highest proportion during this time frame and the
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had either one child or none recorded a gradual increase from 1981 to 2006, while this number
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same age who had two or more children.

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in 40-44 years
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who had no
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was 8. 5% and in 1986 this
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increased
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of one in ten. The
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of the same age group with one child were 7. 6% in 1981 and reached to 8. 7% 5 years later. The
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of
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who witnessed a fall in the same age category with two, four and more
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were much higher approximately a quarter.

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reached to over 15% for childless
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while it reached to 13% for
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with 1 child. The
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while the
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for three of four
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decreased over time.
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IELTS academic The given table chart illustrates how many the proportion of children ever born to 40-44 years old women in Australia from 1981, 1986, 1996 and 2006.

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