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The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing of a fuel named ethanol from the given source called Corn.

The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing of a fuel named ethanol from the given source called Corn. Overall, it is clear that the production of ethanol fuel is not a piece of cake, where it undergoes several significant steps until it is done with the procedure and ready for packing, finally transportation. Firstly, the procedure involves in storing the corn in huge containers or any particular vessel, the stored corn is then ready for grinding and milling process which then leads to cooking for about 4 hours. Meanwhile, water is added as a part of the process and it is set for 48 hours of fermenting. Separation is then carried out in order to extract the fuel. Secondly, a solid by-product is formed, by adding the given liquid consequently which leads to the upcoming step called Purification of ethanol. This process in turn a time consuming one which is carried for 5 hours. Thirdly, the ethanol which is purified is stored in containers followed by assembling the vessels and transporting in respective vehicles.
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diagram illustrates the manufacturing of a fuel named
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ethanol
from the
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source called Corn.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the production of
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ethanol
fuel is not a piece of cake, where it undergoes several significant steps until it
is done
with the procedure and ready for packing,
finally
transportation.

Firstly
, the procedure involves in storing the corn in huge containers or any particular vessel, the stored corn is then ready for grinding and milling process which then leads to cooking for about 4 hours. Meanwhile, water is
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added
as a part of the
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process and
it
is set
for 48 hours of fermenting. Separation is then carried out in order to extract the fuel.

Secondly
, a solid by-product
is formed
, by adding the
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given
liquid
consequently
which leads to the upcoming step called Purification of
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ethanol
. This process in turn a
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time consuming
one which
is carried
for 5 hours.

Thirdly
, the
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ethanol
which
is purified
is stored
in containers followed by assembling the vessels and transporting in respective vehicles.
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing of a fuel named ethanol from the given source called Corn.

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6.0
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