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The graph below shows the population figure of different type of turtles in India from 1980 t0 2012

The respective graph shows the data of thirty-two years of turtle’s population. Overall the graph is showing the data of four species of turtle and one can see the gradual rise in population over the years, however, some of the species are on the verge of extent. The population growth of olive ridley turtles has gradually increased on the index from 100 to 120. Subsequently, one can see the gradual decline in leatherback population over the years, similarly, the green turtle population has also reduced from 100 to 90 on the index from 1980-2012. The number of all species has remained consistent in population throughout these thirty-two years. Population growth of green turtles have shown some fluctuations, however, it has retained the numbers constant in the last six years.

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