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The chart below shows the global sale of different kind of digital games from 2000 to 2006

The data provided here gives information regarding the global sale of digital games (mobile games, online games, console games, and handheld games) in six years (2000-2006). Overall, the trends in global game sales have increased persistently in all sections but one can see the decline in sales of one particular game. Online games were not much popular in the early 2000s, however, there is a subsequent rise in their sale over the years. On contrary, the sale of console games declined from 6 billion dollars in 2000 to approximately 3bn dollars in 2006. It is quite intriguing that handheld games have maximum sales of about 18billion-dollar throughout these six years (2000-2006) with online games as the second-biggest sales of around 7 billion.
The data provided here gives information regarding the global
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of digital
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(mobile
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, online
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, console
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, and handheld
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games)
in six years (2000-2006).

Overall
, the trends in global game
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have increased
persistently
in all sections
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the decline in
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of one particular game.

Online
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games
were not much popular in the early 2000s,
however
, there is a subsequent rise in their
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sale
over the years. On contrary, the
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of console
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games
declined from 6 billion dollars in 2000 to approximately 3bn dollars in 2006.

It is quite intriguing that handheld
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games
have maximum
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of about 18billion-dollar throughout these six years (2000-2006) with online
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games
as the second-biggest
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of around 7 billion.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the global sale of different kind of digital games from 2000 to 2006

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