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The given diagram depicts the information about the alteration of a park between 1980 and now

The given diagram depicts the information about the alteration of a park between 1980 and now NrV3b

It is clearly seen that in the year 1980, the pond was situated in the south which was covered by benches from two sides. There was one pathway running through the park from the West gate to the south gate. In the north east there were several trees and in the south east little flowers were planted there. moving further to the present, the playground is constructed at the place of flowers in the south east. To the opposite side of the playground, north east, a new picnic area with chairs, desks and barbecue grills has been set up. flowers are replaced with bushes to the south west. the pathway is extended and facing to all the four sides of the park. to conclude, the park is now more developed then before. it has many facilities as compared to the past.

It is clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that in the year 1980, the pond was situated
 in the south which was covered
 by benches from two sides. There was one pathway running through the park from the West gate to the south gate. In the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 there were several trees and in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 flowers were planted
 there. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMoving
moving
further
 to the present, the playground is constructed
 at the place of flowers in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
. To the opposite side of the playground, This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
, a new picnic area with chairs, desks and barbecue grills has been set
 up. flowers are replaced
 with bushes to the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-westsouthwest
south west
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 pathway is extended
 and facing to all the four sides of the park. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
 conclude, the park is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 more developed then This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 facilities as compared to the past. 