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The diagrams shows how concretes is produced and how it is used in gravel making

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The diagram illustrates the ways by which cement is made also, how it is then used in concrete. Overall, it is clear that limestone and clay passes through four stages before cement is ready for use. And while cement production requires several equipments, concrete making needs ones one. Firstly, limestone and clay are crush into powder then pour into the mixer which combine them to form a powder. Thereafter, it is pass into the rotating heat. This machine has a constant supply of heat from an opposite edge. After what, the heated powder is then ground and cement is produce, bagged and ready for use. On the other hand, gravels most numerous ingredients for concrete making accounting for 50% of the total what is required. Followed by sand which 20%. Cement make up 15%. Lastly water is 10%. However, they are all put into the concrete mixer which mixes it and eventually produce concrete.

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used
 in concrete. Overall
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clear
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cement
 is ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. And while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
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 production requires several equipments, concrete making needs Did you mean "one's"?one's
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Firstly
, limestone and clay are crush into powder then pour into the mixer which combine them to form a powder. Thereafter, it is pass into the rotating heat. This machine has a constant supply of heat from an opposite edge. After what, the heated powder is then ground and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 is produce, bagged and ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

On the other hand
, gravels most numerous ingredients for concrete making accounting for 50% of the total what is required
. Followed by sand which 20%. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
Cement
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make
 up 15%. Lastly
 water is 10%. However
, they are all put into the concrete mixer which mixes it and eventually
 produce concrete. 