Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the percentage of water distribution in the world and also the consumption of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and, Canada.

The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the percentage of water distribution in the world and also the consumption of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and, Canada. doqDP
The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the percentage of water distribution in the world and also the consumption of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and, Canada. Overall, it is evident that a vast majority of the world's water is saltwater and the most significant part of freshwater contains from ice and glaciers. In Egypt and Saudi Arabia, the main consumption of water is for agriculture while in Canada the primary use of that is in industry. It can be seen that the figure for water usage in industry and homes are quite the same as each other in Egypt and Saudi Arabia but this trend is being reversed in Canada. The percentage of saltwater is 97% of the total and only 3% is accounted for freshwater. Freshwater also contains ice and glaciers and groundwater which are 79% and 20% respectively and only 1% is for surface water is assigned for surface water. On the other hand, the consumption of water, in agriculture is about 80% in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, whereas, in Canada, this percentage decreased dramatically to around 20%. A slight dwindle from over 10% to exactly 10% can also be seen in domestic use of water.
The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
distribution in the world and
also
the consumption of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and, Canada.

Overall
, it is evident that a vast majority of the world's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is saltwater and the most significant part of freshwater contains from ice and glaciers. In Egypt and Saudi Arabia, the main consumption of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is for agriculture while in Canada the primary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
that is
in industry. It can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that the figure for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
usage in industry and homes are quite the same as each other in Egypt and Saudi Arabia
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this trend is
being reversed
in Canada.

The percentage of saltwater is 97% of the total and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
3%
is accounted
for freshwater. Freshwater
also
contains ice and glaciers and groundwater which are 79% and 20%
respectively
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
1% is for surface
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is assigned
for surface water.

On the other hand
, the consumption of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
, in agriculture is about 80% in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, whereas, in Canada, this percentage decreased
dramatically
to around 20%. A slight dwindle from over 10% to exactly 10% can
also
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in domestic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the percentage of water distribution in the world and also the consumption of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and, Canada.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The two pie charts and the bar chart illustrate the percentage of water distribution in the world and also the consumption of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and, Canada.