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The given data shows the use of five different types of fuel to generate electricity in five Asian country in 2005

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The given data table compares five different types of energy utilised to produce electricity in the year 2005 in first five Asian countries. Mainly nuclear, coal and lignite, petroleum products, hydro and wind and other sources used to produce electricity. It is clearly seen that there was a significant variation in the generation of electricity. Overall, Malaysia generates the highest electricity through coal and lignite i. e 61%, followed by Singapore, while Malaysia produce the least amount of the electricity in petroleum products, followed by Singapore. Whereas, Thailand produces 42% of electricity by using other sources. 48% of hydro and wind used by South Korea to produce electricity while 3% of the utilising petroleum product followed by Japan. Japan uses 49% of nuclear energy to generate electricity.
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in the year 2005 in
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that there was a significant variation in the generation of electricity.

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through coal and lignite i. e 61%, followed by Singapore, while Malaysia
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the least amount of the
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in petroleum products, followed by Singapore.
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, Thailand
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42% of
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electricity
by using other sources. 48% of hydro and wind
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by South Korea to
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produce
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electricity
while 3% of the
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petroleum product followed by Japan. Japan
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49% of nuclear energy to generate
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electricity
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IELTS academic The given data shows the use of five different types of fuel to generate electricity in five Asian country in 2005

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