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These graphs represents the in statistic of population numbers in Japan. It is clear from graphs that the highest propotion was in 2005 over the period given, and the lowest figure was in 1950.

These graphs represents the in statistic of population numbers in Japan. It is clear from graphs that the highest propotion was in 2005 over the period given, and the lowest figure was in 1950. m18NK
These graphs represents the in statistic of population numbers in Japan. It is clear from graphs that the highest propotion was in 2005 over the period given, and the lowest figure was in 1950. According to what bar char shown from 1950 to 1990 there was an increase regualary, then moving to next towenty five between 1990 and 2015 the propontion of people was slightly growth. While this numbers will change, and going to drop until 2055. Focusing on table that illustrates the numbers of older people who was in 65 age or over in 1950, there figures was 4. 1 milllions, 25. 7 milliions almost 4. 9 percent and 20. 0 pecent in prespectifly. But in the future the expectation point to rise more, in 2035 at almost 37. 2 millions nearly 34. 0 (percen) of inhabitance will be old. Afterthat in the next towenty years the trend say the numbers of elder population going to go down slightly, and will be around 36. 5 millions equall 41. 0%.
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IELTS academic These graphs represents the in statistic of population numbers in Japan. It is clear from graphs that the highest propotion was in 2005 over the period given, and the lowest figure was in 1950.

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