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The charts below show changes in the age structure of the population of a European country between 1901 and 1981 and a prediction for 2021.

The charts below show changes in the age structure of the population of a European country between 1901 and 1981 and a prediction for 2021. BJLRp
The given pie charts gives information regarding the population by age group in Europe over 8- year period and the projection for year 2021. Overall, it can be seen that the number of elder people, ages 65 and above, increased substanttially over time as the population inflate as well. The same trend is also foresee in the near future. To begin with, there is a significant increase in population between 1901 and 1941 with the date showing 38, 237, 000 and 50, 225000 respectively. Despite of these rise in figure, the persentage of human population below 65 remained the same at 95%, between 65-84 at 4% and, 85 and above at only 1%. The date changed in year 1981, with population that slightly climbed up to 58, 801, 000, Europeans below the age of 65 dropped to 83% those with the age ranging from 65-84 at 13% and finally, those whose age is more than 85 is at 4%. It is estimated in the future that in 2021 the population will continue to rise reaching 87, 658, 000. The number of people will consist of 79% at the age ranging from 0-65, 15% for 65-84 and lasty, 6% for people aged 85 and above
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group in Europe over 8- year period and the projection for year 2021.

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that the number of elder
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,
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inflate
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between 1901 and 1941 with the date showing 38, 237, 000 and 50, 225000
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below 65 remained the same at 95%, between 65-84 at 4% and, 85 and above at
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1%. The date
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that
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of 65 dropped to 83% those with the
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ranging from 65-84 at 13% and
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is more than 85 is at 4%.

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will continue to rise reaching 87, 658, 000. The number of
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will consist of 79% at the
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ranging from 0-65, 15% for 65-84 and
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, 6% for
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IELTS academic The charts below show changes in the age structure of the population of a European country between 1901 and 1981 and a prediction for 2021.

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