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Potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country 1976-2006

Potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country 1976-2006 2bxww

The line graph represents the data about potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European nation in unit of grams from 1976 to 2006. Overall, potatoes and rice had been eaten by a European region shows both downward trends. Meanwhile, the amount of pasta shows an upward trends. First of all, in initially 1976 potatoes are the most eaten by the European in just above 400 grams per person in a week. Although some fluctuate, it has been slight increased in 1984 for around 450 grams. After that, the amount continue to dropped steadily until the lowest point in 2006 for just almost 100 grams per person per week. Secondly, the amount of rice consumed in 1976 is around 300 grams and in declined steadily for almost 25 years reached nearly 150 grams in the year 2000. However, it was a significant rose to the year 2006 in amount of around 220 grams. Other than that, pasta was the lowest food had been consumed in 1976 for 250 grams a person. On the other hand, it was significant climbed until 1997 and remains stable throughout the time for exactly a half kilogram.

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 from 1976 to 2006.

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 in the year 2000. However
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amount
 of around 220 grams.

Other than that, pasta was the lowest food had been consumed
 in 1976 for 250 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatriarchancestorgrannygrandma
grams
 a person. On the other hand
, it was significant climbed until 1997 and remains stable throughout the time for exactly a half kilogram. 