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The table compares the proportion of water usage for domestic, industrial and agricultural purposes in six countries of the world in the year 2003.

The table compares the proportion of water usage for domestic, industrial and agricultural purposes in six countries of the world in the year 2003. Nr39b
The table illustrates how much water had been used for domestic, industrial and agriculture purposed of six nations in 2013. The data shows as the percentage of the water usage. Overall, in terms of the water usafe od domestic area, Australia was the biggest user, while Canada shared the largest spent for the industrial purpose. And Chinese were using water in agriculture mostly, making up the primary user in the year 2013. European countries, such as Russia and UK, shared a large amounts of water usage in industry, had 62% and 73%, respectively. Whereas Canada accounted for 81% water usage in the same area, making it the leader user among all. on the contry, Australia showed negilible numbers on industrial area. And in terms of agriculture, UK just made up 4%, the less number of this category. Likewise, China just used 6% and 7% respectively in domestic and industrial aspects.
The table illustrates how much
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had been
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for domestic,
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and agriculture purposed of six nations in 2013. The data
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as the percentage of the
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, in terms of the
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domestic area, Australia was the biggest user, while Canada shared the largest spent for the
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purpose. And Chinese were using
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in agriculture
mostly
, making up the primary user in the year 2013.

European countries, such as Russia and UK, shared a large
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of
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usage in industry, had 62% and 73%,
respectively
. Whereas Canada accounted for 81%
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usage in the same area, making it the leader user among all.

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, Australia
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numbers on
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area. And in terms of agriculture, UK
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made up 4%, the less number of this category.
Likewise
, China
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used
6% and 7%
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in domestic and
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aspects.
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IELTS academic The table compares the proportion of water usage for domestic, industrial and agricultural purposes in six countries of the world in the year 2003.

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