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The given chart shows how many foreign tourists visited to three different regions in a European country from 1987 to 2007.

The given chart shows how many foreign tourists visited to three different regions in a European country from 1987 to 2007. 0n0m5
Overall, both the number of overseas visitors to the coast, the mountains, the lakes increased. However, the number of overseas visitors to the lakes rose more volatility than the other areas. In 1987, the number of foreign visitors to the cost accounted for 40000 people, which was twice as much as than that of the mountains. Ten years later, both the number of visitors from abroad to the coast anh the mountains grow significantly, with 45000 people and 30000 people respectively. In the remainder of the surveyed period, the number of foreign tourists visited to the coast increase sharply to 75000 people while that of the mountains rose slightly to 35000 people. By contrast, the number of foreign visitors to the lakes reached the bottom (10000 people) in the year of 1987. Ten years later, the firgure increase dramatically to 75000 people (the top rank) then dropping to 50000 people in 2007.
Overall
, both the
number
of overseas
visitors
to the coast, the
mountains
, the lakes increased.
However
, the
number
of overseas
visitors
to the lakes rose more volatility than the other areas. In 1987, the
number
of foreign
visitors
to the cost accounted for 40000
people
, which was twice as much
as
than that of the
mountains
. Ten years later, both the
number
of
visitors
from abroad to the coast
anh
the
mountains
grow
significantly
, with 45000
people
and 30000
people
respectively
. In the remainder of the surveyed period, the
number
of foreign tourists visited to the coast increase
sharply
to 75000
people
while that of the
mountains
rose
slightly
to 35000
people
. By contrast, the
number
of foreign
visitors
to the lakes reached the bottom (10000
people)
in the year of 1987. Ten years later, the
firgure
increase
dramatically
to 75000
people
(the top rank) then dropping to 50000
people
in 2007.
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IELTS academic The given chart shows how many foreign tourists visited to three different regions in a European country from 1987 to 2007.

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