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The table and figure below shows tourist arrivals and departures in Cyprus between 1976 and 1989, and composition by length of stay

The table and figure below shows tourist arrivals and departures in Cyprus between 1976 and 1989, and composition by length of stay 0n0R1
The table and line graph gives information on the number of visiting and departing tourists in Cyprus from 1976 to 1989. It also shows the percentage on how long they stayed in the country. Figures for tourist arrivals are given in thousands. Overall, the majority of the tourists who visited Cyprus stayed for less than a month while the lowest numbers belong to unstated length of stay. In addition, the rate of tourists visiting the said country showed a dramatic increment from 1976 to 1989 with an exception where a stable trend was recorded in 1976 to 1977. It is clear that the number of visitors had a 7 fold increase by the end of the study period. Most of the tourist who travelled to Cyprus stayed for less than a month with the highest recorded figures in 1988 at 93. 9%. Meanwhile, those whose length of visit ranged from one to two months, where only between 4. 1-13. 1% in the 1977 to 1988. Those who stayed for two months and an unknown period of visit in the region gathered the smallest percentage which is all equal to or below 5. 1%. In terms of number of visitors in 1976 to 1989, a considerable increase was noted. Although a static trend was recorded from 1976 to 1977 at figures less than two thousand, it increased continuously reaching its peak in 1989 at almost 14, 000 tourists.
The table and line graph gives information on the
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of visiting and departing
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in Cyprus from 1976 to 1989. It
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the percentage on how long they
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in the country. Figures for
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arrivals are
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in thousands.

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who visited Cyprus
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stayed
for less than a
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month
while the lowest
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numbers
belong to unstated length of stay.
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, the rate of
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tourists
visiting the said country
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showed
a dramatic increment from 1976 to 1989 with an exception where a stable trend
was recorded
in 1976 to 1977. It is
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clear
that the
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number
of visitors had a 7 fold increase by the
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end
of the study period.

Most of the
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tourist
who travelled to Cyprus
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stayed
for less than a
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month
with the highest recorded figures in 1988 at 93. 9%. Meanwhile, those whose length of visit ranged from one to two
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months
, where
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between 4. 1-13. 1% in the 1977 to 1988. Those who
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stayed
for two
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months
and an unknown period of visit in the region gathered the smallest percentage which is all equal to or below 5. 1%.

In terms of
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number
of visitors in 1976 to 1989, a considerable increase
was noted
. Although a static trend
was recorded
from 1976 to 1977 at figures less than two thousand, it increased
continuously
reaching its peak in 1989 at almost 14, 000
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tourists
.
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