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book 8 test 1 task 1, products productio decrease

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The pie chart illustrates the reasons of decrease in agriculture productes produdicn in 90s decade. Furthermore, the table compaires these couses among North America, Europe and Oceania. According to chart, over-grazing is the most important reason of lands degradation with 35%. Indeed, 11. 3 percent of land degradation of Australia is happened due to over grazing following by 55 percent in Europe and just 15 percent in North America. The deforestation and over-cultivation had almost same shere in degradation and They become main reason of aggriculture products reduce in Europe with 9. 8% and North America with 3. 3 % respectively. 7. 7 % of europe lands is also degradate by over - cultivation. Memovhile, It is not reason of oceania degradation at all. In conclusion, Europe land with 23 % of degradation are in a serious danger. In Contrast with Only 5 % of North America lands which means they are more safe.
The pie chart illustrates the
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reasons
of decrease in agriculture
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productes
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produdicn
in 90s decade.
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compaires
these
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couses
among North America, Europe and Oceania.

According to chart, over-grazing is the most
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important
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reason
of
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lands
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degradation
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, 11. 3 percent of
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land
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degradation
of Australia
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just
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North America.

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degradation and
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aggriculture
products
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reduce
in Europe with 9. 8% and North America with 3. 3 %
respectively
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europe
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lands
is
also
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degradate
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-
cultivation.
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, It is not
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reason
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oceania
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, Europe
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land
with 23 % of
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degradation
are in a serious
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IELTS academic book 8 test 1 task 1, products productio decrease

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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