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Map of hospital connectivity in 2007 and 2010

Map of hospital connectivity in 2007 and 2010 rLjqN

The two presented map describe the development that took place at a city hospital from 2007 to 2010. As an overall trend, it is crystal clear the three visible changes that is bus station, a separate car parking for public and two roundabouts. Except these there were not many changes made. As it is observed, in 2007 there were three bus stop on either side of the hospital road however These were no longer presented in 2010. insted we see the addition of a bus station on the left side of the hospital road. Furthermore, a common car park was located on east side of the hospital road and it’s for both the public and staff members. In 2010 some significant change could be seen that common car park was allowed for the staff members in addition a different car park was well established on the east side of the hospital. Finally, two roundabouts have been constructed a the bother of the hospital one at the intersection with ring road and other at the city Road junction.

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describe
 the development that took place at a city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 from 2007 to 2010.

As an overall
 trend, it is crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 the three visible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
that is
 bus station, a separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 parking for public and two roundabouts. Except these there were not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 made.

As it is observed
, in 2007 there were three bus Possible agreement error. The noun 'stop' seems to be countable, so consider using: "stops".stops
stop
 on either side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
however
 These were no longer presented in 2010. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterInsted
insted
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the addition of a bus station on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. Furthermore
, a common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park was located
 on east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and it’s for both the public and staff members. In 2010 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 could be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 for the staff members in addition
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park was well established on the east side of the hospital.

Finally
, two roundabouts have been constructed
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "a" or "the" is left.athe
a the
 bother of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 one at the intersection with ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and other at the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 junction. 