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The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout.

The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout. Yyogj
The map demonstrate the existing plan of house, there are some changes in a new plan as renovate required. Talking about the latest architectural plan there are some changes in staircase, inner walls and internal door. comparing it the existing plan open entry directly from stairs leads to living room, the size of living room has been increased as compared in previously. There are major changes done to kitchen as the doors has been shifted to the bottom side of floor which is located at the left side of entrance. Kitchen platform has been added in the proposed plan, back door entry to cooking room is same. Some minor modification near stairs, In the latest plan redesign of stairs is done and the storage room below the stairs is removed and width of stairs increased. Positioning of inner walls has been made and walls are removed from living room to create some space. Entrance renmained the same.
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as renovate required.

Talking about the latest architectural
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plan
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in staircase, inner walls and internal door.
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comparing
it the existing
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open entry
directly
from stairs leads to living
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, the size of living
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been increased
as compared in previously.

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changes
done to kitchen as the doors has
been shifted
to the bottom side of floor which
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at the
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left
side of entrance. Kitchen platform has been
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added
in the proposed
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, back door entry to cooking
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is same.

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Some
minor modification near stairs, In the latest
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plan
redesign of stairs
is done
and the storage
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below the stairs
is removed
and width of stairs increased. Positioning of inner walls has
been made
and walls
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from living
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout.

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157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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