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The given chart illustrates waste selection including paper, glass, tins

The given chart illustrates waste selection including paper, glass, tins MqEW6
The given chart illustrates waste selection including paper, glass, tins and garden by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015, a period of 4 years. It is noticeable that paper in all but one of the year 2013 was the highest figure while garden waste showed the opposite. The total amount of waste collection each year has similar trends whereas only one year witnessed fluctuation. As can be seen from the chart, in 2011, paper was the most collected category of waste, at 57 tons, higher than garden by 25 tons of waste. There was a significant decline in paper waste from 2011 to 2013 at 40 tons. Afterwards, by 2015, paper waste had risen with figures reaching the peak at 70 tons in the last period shown. There were fluctuations in both glass waste and the tins one, with 52 tons of glass and 39 tons of tins being collected in the last year. Meanwhile, there was a dramatic drop in the figure of garden waste, from 32 tons to 15 tons in 2012, which was more than two times shorter. Then it showed a gradual fluctuation till 2015, with 35 tons being selected.
The
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chart illustrates
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selection including paper, glass, tins and
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garden
by a recycling
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between 2011 and 2015, a period of 4 years.

It is noticeable that paper in all
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one of the
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year
2013 was the highest figure while
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garden
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waste
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showed
the opposite. The total amount of
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waste
collection each
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year
has similar trends whereas
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only
one
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year
witnessed fluctuation.

As can be
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seen
from the chart, in 2011, paper was the most collected category of
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waste
, at 57 tons, higher than
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garden
by 25 tons of
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waste
. There was a significant decline in paper
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waste
from 2011 to 2013 at 40 tons. Afterwards, by 2015, paper
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waste
had risen with figures reaching the peak at 70 tons in the last period shown.

There were fluctuations in both glass
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waste
and the tins one, with 52 tons of glass and 39 tons of tins
being collected
in the last
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year
. Meanwhile, there was a dramatic drop in the figure of
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garden
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waste
, from 32 tons to 15 tons in 2012, which was more than two times shorter. Then it
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showed
a gradual fluctuation till 2015, with 35 tons
being selected
.
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates waste selection including paper, glass, tins

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  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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