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The table below compares the data for the world's large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below compares the data for the world's large-scale and small-scale sea fishing industries. d3gqp
The chart illustrates the proportion of the advantages of the worldwide fishing industry including Annual landings for human consumption, annual catch discarded at sea, annual catch for industrial reduction, fuel used per tonne of fish, the number of fishers employed and the government subsidies of large-scale and small-scale. From the above where it can be overall seen that small-scale recorded the highest number of fishers employed while the counterpart took that of the remaining. Mentioning the annual landings for human consumption, catch discarded at sea, catch for industrial reduction and fuel used, the percentage of large -scale was remarkably higher than the counterparts in all categories. The number of annual landings for human consumption of small-scale held the highest position at about 27milliom tons which account for nearly half of that of large- scale. Additionally, the rate of annual catch discarded at sea and for dustrial reduction to fishmeal and oil of large-scale took the second and third point at 26 and 10 million respectively. On the contrary, these data of small- scale were almost none. Meanwhile, there was a four-fold in the number of the fuel used of fish for human consumption between large-scale and small-scale, in a range of 5 and 20 tonnes. Regarding the remaining, the small-scale recorded the highest position in the number of fishers employed at approximately 30 million while that of the opposite at less than nearly 11 million. However, the government subsidies for small- scale at 5 to 7 billion USD which accounted for nearly one-fifth of large-scale at 25 to 30 billion.
The chart illustrates the proportion of the advantages of the worldwide fishing industry including Annual landings for
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consumption
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discarded at sea, annual
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catch
for industrial reduction, fuel
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used
per tonne of fish, the
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number
of fishers employed and the
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government
subsidies of
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large-scale
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small-scale
. From the above where it can be
overall
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seen
that
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small-scale
recorded the highest
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number
of fishers employed while the counterpart took that of the remaining.

Mentioning the annual landings for
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human
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consumption
,
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catch
discarded at sea,
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catch
for industrial reduction and fuel
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used
, the percentage of large
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-scale
was
remarkably
higher than the counterparts in all categories. The
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number
of annual landings for
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human
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consumption
of
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held the highest position at about 27milliom tons which account for
nearly
half of that of large-
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scale
.
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, the rate of annual
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catch
discarded at sea and for
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dustrial
reduction to
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fishmeal
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took the second and third point at 26 and 10 million
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-
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were almost none. Meanwhile, there was a four-fold in the
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of the fuel
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of fish for
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between
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large-scale
and
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small-scale
, in a range of 5 and 20 tonnes.

Regarding the remaining, the
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recorded the highest position in the
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of fishers employed at approximately 30 million while that of the opposite at less than
nearly
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subsidies for
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at 5 to 7 billion USD which accounted for
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one-fifth of
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at 25 to 30 billion.
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