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The bar chart below shows the ratio of income to expenditure of Americans by age range.

The bar chart below shows the ratio of income to expenditure of Americans by age range. B7dM6

The diagram illustrates the data about the ratio of income to expenditures by the citizens of America in 2013. Additionally, the computation of the information is done in dollars. Overall, it is evident that American, who were less than 25 years, had the least income and spending, whereas people belonging to the age group between 45 to 54 years earned the highest annual income and spent the most as compared to other age groups in 2013. To take an in-depth look, the most noticeable feature was that American teenagers consumed more money than earned, 2000 dollars higher than income. In contrast, Americans between 35 to 54 years earned around 80000 dollars annually and their expenditure cost was approximately 60000 dollars. Similarly, the adult group spent near about 11000 dollars less than their yearly earnings. Moving further, the income of people between 45 to 54 years and 55 to 64 years was nearly 75000 dollars and 55000 dollars respectively. But, the expenditure of citizens between 55 to 64 years was greater as compared to the age group between 65 to 74 years. In addition, the senior citizens, who aged above 75 years, earned 32 dollars and utilised their income completely on expenditures.

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