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Yes the given process chart give information about the how rainwater store in Australia and become it as a drinking water.

Yes the given process chart give information about the how rainwater store in Australia and become it as a drinking water. paM5L

. The given process chart illustrates the information regarding how rainwater reserved in Australian towns and then after use it as a drinking water. My taking it over all it becomes evident that in a total there are 4 step in order to successfully accomplished the procedure first and most important step is that water come from the roof of house through rain brain system then after water pass through the water filter plant and filter water stored in a huge underground water tank after that water Centre to the another tank for treatment by drain Where are some Chemicals added in the water finally drinking water supply to the house by help of pipeline. Overall it can be seen that the process of stored rainwater and after that it is used as a drinking water is a complex process which involves many steps.

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 process chart illustrates the information regarding how rainwater reserved in Australian towns and then after This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
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come
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house
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 drinking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
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house
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help
 of pipeline.

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