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The given chart illustrates the major information on the demographics of 4 different nations includes China, Russia,Usa and Uk.

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The given chart illustrates the major information on the demographics of 4 different nations includes China, Russia, Usa and Uk. One of the most striking points is that the lower population nation is, the more GPD and life expectancy they had. Look in the table for more detail, China and Usa are both 2 nations have significant more population than other two. Additonally, although usa has the most GDP per capital with 53, 681 USD, their average life expectancy was the lowest with just 69. 2 compared to other in the table. At can be seen from the table, china has the smallest GPD per capital with 6807 usa but their life expectancy was the second highest with 75. 2. Moreover, Russia GPD and life expectancy range third in the table with approximately 14986000 in population and 72. 3 in life expextancy. Uk population has the lowest number with 6597686, whereas their GDP with 41. 000 usa per year, and life expectancy hovered around 81. 5 and considered the highest in the table.
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the major information on the demographics of 4 different nations includes China, Russia, Usa and Uk.

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