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Westering in 2000 and in 2011

Westering in 2000 and in 2011 5a9NA
The maps illustrate significant developments have taken place of westering between 2000 and 2011. Overall, during this time the westering was industrialized and modernised. As for industrialized, the factories, which located in the southwest of Westering was transformed into a multi-stroy car park. The car park in the southwest was knocked down to make a techno park. The Bus&railway station was built on the opposite to hotel. The street market was demolished. The bus station, which located between detached houses and street market was constructed to hotel. As regards modernised, the half woodland and one of the detached houses was transformed on woodland. The other remaining parts was constructed on golf club. On the north of westering was built the motorway M51 and in the southeast of westering was conducted the railway. On the open space in the northwest was erected block of flats. Houses, shops and school was remained unchanged.
The maps illustrate significant developments have taken place of
westering
between 2000 and 2011.
Overall
, during this time the
westering
was industrialized
and
modernised
. As for industrialized, the factories, which located in the southwest of
Westering
was transformed
into a
multi-stroy
car park. The car park in the southwest
was knocked
down to
make
a techno park. The
Bus&railway
station
was built
on the opposite to hotel.
The
street market
was demolished
.
The
bus station, which located between detached
houses
and street market
was constructed
to hotel. As regards
modernised
, the half woodland and one of the detached
houses
was transformed
on woodland. The other remaining parts
was constructed
on golf club. On the north of
westering
was built
the motorway M51 and in the southeast of
westering
was conducted
the railway. On the open space in the northwest
was erected
block of flats.
Houses
, shops and school
was remained
unchanged.
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IELTS academic Westering in 2000 and in 2011

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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