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The chart below shows the changes in thr students strength of a college in four faculties from 2005to 2007.prepare a report for a university lecture in at least 150words

The chart below shows the changes in thr students strength of a college in four faculties from 2005to 2007. prepare a report for a university lecture in at least 150words wOYXq
The bar graph depicts the variations in the students strength of a college in four faculties from the year 2005to 2007. At the first glance, it is crystal clear that in 2005, alternation in the graduates or postgraduates strength of college in arts was 600 however, in the following two years, it decreased to 500 as well as near about 480 respecively. Probing further, in the year 2005, variations of students was noticed at 200 and practically 130 respectively in commerce and law stream. Approximately 220and near about 230number of students strength was noticed in the year 2006 nevertheless, it decreased slightly in case of commerce stream, and surged rapidly in case of law faculty. Overall, in case of science and law faculty, variation in students strength had maximum however, in case of other fields there was a slight change over the span of three years.
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2005to 2007.

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that in 2005, alternation in the graduates or postgraduates
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strength
of college in arts was 600
however
, in the following two years, it decreased to 500
as well
as near about 480
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respecively
.

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further
, in the
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year
2005, variations of
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students
was noticed
at 200 and
practically
130
respectively
in commerce and law stream. Approximately 220and near about 230number of
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students
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strength
was noticed
in the
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year
2006
nevertheless
, it decreased
slightly
in case of commerce stream, and surged
rapidly
in case of law faculty.

Overall
, in case of science and law faculty, variation in
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students
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had maximum
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, in case of other fields there was a slight
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change
over the span of three years.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the changes in thr students strength of a college in four faculties from 2005to 2007. prepare a report for a university lecture in at least 150words

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