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maps illustrate how a town of Westerling was converted after heaps of growth over the course of 11 years, starting in 2000.

maps illustrate how a town of Westerling was converted after heaps of growth over the course of 11 years, starting in 2000. QRrMx
The provided maps illustrate how a town of Westerling was converted after heaps of growth over the course of 11 years, starting in 2000. Overall, it can be seen that the Westerling underwent with new addtion of many facilities to the town. There was a significant change of the new Westerling, which was different from the Westerling’town in the first time. In 2005, this town ship had a North Road ran along from the west to east. Having said that, the accomodations, stores and some plants were located west of the Green Street. Not only the series of residential areas were situated south of the Woodland, but also north of the bus stop. Addtionally, the institution lied to the east of the Woodland, while the car park was in close proximity to the bus stop and street market. With regard to the second map, the Westerling’town was changed in 2011. The open space which lied in the north west of Westerling’ town ship was replaced by block of apartments. Besides, the North Road ran along from west to east was greatly expanded to Motoway M51. The large Woodland was detached to a piece of Woodland and the golf club, which were directly oppisite the lodge. Notwithstading, the education institute previously remained the same and the Green Street was perpendicular to the main road of motobike. Last but not least, a myriad of vacant land lied to the east of amenities was erected to the technopark.
The provided maps illustrate how a
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Westerling
was converted
after heaps of growth over the course of 11 years, starting in 2000.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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Westerling
underwent with new
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addtion
of
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many
facilities to the
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town
. There was a significant
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change
of the new
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Westerling
, which was
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different
from the
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Westerling
’town in the
first
time.

In 2005, this
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town
ship had a
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North
Road ran along from the west to east. Having said that, the
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accomodations
, stores and
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some
plants
were located
west of the Green Street. Not
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only
the series of residential areas
were situated
south of the
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Woodland
,
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but
also
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north
of the bus
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stop
.
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Addtionally
, the institution lied to the east of the
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Woodland
, while the car park was in
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close proximity
to the bus
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stop
and street market.

With regard to the second map, the
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Westerling
’town was
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changed
in 2011. The open space which lied in the
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north west
of
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Westerling
’
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town
ship
was replaced
by block of apartments.
Besides
, the
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North
Road ran along from west to east was
greatly
expanded to
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Motoway
M51. The large
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Woodland
was detached
to a piece of
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Woodland
and the golf club, which were
directly
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oppisite
the lodge.
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Notwithstading
, the education institute previously remained the same and the Green Street was perpendicular to the main road of
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motobike
. Last
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but
not least, a myriad of vacant land lied to the east of amenities
was erected
to the
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technopark
.
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IELTS academic maps illustrate how a town of Westerling was converted after heaps of growth over the course of 11 years, starting in 2000.

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