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The diagram below show the different stages that are involved to publish a book

The diagram below show the different stages that are involved to publish a book PRq8j
The diagram depicts the information about the nine steps that are involved in the process of books. after analysing it can be seen clearly that in the first step, writing is done on the paper. In the second step, written paper are deliver to publishing houses. In the third step, paper are studied by auditor. In the next step, of stamps contact is made by auditors with the publishing house. The diagram futher collates that in the fifth step, design of layout is done by the designer. After that, final decision on layout is selected subsequently, paper is a sent of printing, Last but not least step, all the pages are binded finally book is a ready and distribute to book shop. overall there are different step which environment publish a book or steps are interlinked with each other omission of any step may halt the whole diagram.
The diagram depicts the information about the nine
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steps
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in the process of
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books
.
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after
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analysing
it can be
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seen
clearly
that in the
first
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step
, writing
is done
on the paper. In the second
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step
, written paper are deliver to publishing
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houses
. In the third
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step
, paper
are studied
by auditor.
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In
the
next
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step
, of stamps contact
is made
by auditors with the publishing
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house
. The diagram
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futher
collates that in the fifth
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step
, design of layout
is done
by the designer. After that, final decision on layout
is selected
subsequently
, paper is a
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sent
of printing, Last
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but
not
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least
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step
, all the pages are
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binded
finally
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book
is a ready and distribute to
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book
shop.
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overall
there are
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different
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step
which environment publish a
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book
or
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steps
are interlinked
with each other omission of any
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step
may halt the whole diagram.
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IELTS academic The diagram below show the different stages that are involved to publish a book

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