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The given chart below shows data on money spenting on books

The given chart below shows data on money spenting on books OwGP3

The supplied chart provides data on currency expenditure for books in four European countries, namely Germany, France, Italy, and Austria over the period of 1995 to 2005. The proportion measures with million US dollar. Overall, it can be seen that there was an increase in the amount ofall the given trends in the given time. As the line graph highlights, Germany started by 80% in 1995, before raising by 10% in 1999, then it saw a slight decrease to about 85%, after that, it raised to approximately 95% which was the highest number in all the depicted time. There was a moderate growth in the percentage of France between 1995 and 1999, from just above than 55% to 60%, before climbing significantly in the next 2 years. Then it levelled off in the following couple year then increased slightly to around 73%. By contrast, Italy experienced maintaining the same level with some fluctuations over the time of 1995 and 2003, then climbed moderately to just above than 50% from 50%. The portion of Austria first, grew gradually, after it have maintained constantly, from 30% to 40 in the yerns of 1995 and 1999, and with 40% at the years of 1999-2001. Afterwards, it experienced a dramatic raise to just above 70%.

The supplied chart provides data on currency expenditure for books in four European countries, namely
 Germany, France, Italy, and Austria over the period of 1995 to 2005. The proportion measures with Use "a million" or use a number before 'million'.a million
million
 US Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
dollar
.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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ofall
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given
 trends in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time.

As the line graph highlights, Germany This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 by 80% in 1995, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 raising by 10% in 1999, then it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a slight decrease to about 85%, after that, it raised to approximately 95% which was the highest number in all the depicted time. There was a moderate growth in the percentage of France between 1995 and 1999, from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Use "(above)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(above)
above
 than 55% to 60%, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 climbing significantly
 in the next
 2 years. Then it levelled off in the following couple year then increased slightly
 to around 73%.

By contrast, Italy experienced maintaining the same level with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations over the time of 1995 and 2003, then climbed moderately
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Use "(above)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(above)
above
 than 50% from 50%. The portion of Austria first
, grew gradually
, after it have maintained constantly
, from 30% to 40 in the Possible spelling mistake found.fernsternsyarnsyearnsyens
yerns
 of 1995 and 1999, and with 40% at the years of 1999-2001. Afterwards, it experienced a dramatic raise to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 above 70%. 