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remodeling plan for the Southwest Airport

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The diagram summarizes a remodeling plan for the Southwest Airport. The development includes the building of several new areas, as well as the change in location of some of the existing areas. Firstly, the new airport will have ten more gates than the previous one. Also, its connectivity with the city will be enhanced, as restoration plans include the installation of a new sky train and a car rental office. Because of the addition of a shopping area, new cafes and ATMs, the facilities will be improved as well. Finally, both the departure and the arrival areas will have two entrances instead of one. The location of most of the existing facilities will be changed during the redevelopment. For instance, the café is being moved from the departures’ north-east area to the departures’ south-west corner near the entrance. Similarly, the check-in counters will be moved and replaced with a bag-drop station.

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new
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areas
, as well
 as the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in location of If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 existing areas.

Firstly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 airport will have ten more gates than the previous one. Also
, its connectivity with the city will be enhanced
, as restoration plans include the installation of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 sky train and a car rental office. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of the addition of a shopping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"cafés
cafes
 and ATMs, the facilities will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
as well
. Finally
, both the departure and the arrival You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 will have two entrances instead
 of one.

The location of most of the existing facilities will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 during the redevelopment. For instance
, the café is being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from the departures’ north-east You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 to the departures’ south-west corner near the entrance. Similarly
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in counters will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 and replaced with a bag-drop station. 