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The diagram demonstrates the solar panel is operates using electricity material in civil areas.

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The diagram demonstrates the solar panel is operates using electricity material in civil areas. Overall, there were five processes to absorb the sunlight which contributes to the demand of people. First of all, on the top of the roof, solar panels will be attached and absorb energy from the sun, then turns into DC. After that, DC will be converted into AC that allows controlling the electric power. From this, energy will be produced to electricities, in which, the electrical panel were charged to transferring from electrical panel to their home. In addition, the power is excessed which flow back to the grid through the meter. Finally,
The diagram demonstrates the solar
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panel
is operates using electricity material in civil areas.

Overall
, there were five processes to absorb the sunlight which contributes to the demand of
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people
.

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First of all
, on the top of the roof, solar
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panels
will
be attached
and absorb energy from the sun, then turns into DC. After that, DC will
be converted
into AC that
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allows
controlling the electric power. From this, energy will
be produced
to
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electricities
, in which, the electrical
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panel
were charged
to transferring from electrical
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panel
to their home.

In addition
, the power is
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excessed
which flow back to the grid through the meter.
Finally
,
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates the solar panel is operates using electricity material in civil areas.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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