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The diagram represents the process of recycling used paper.

The diagram represents the process of recycling used paper. jDBbM
The diagram illustrates how used paper is recycled and change into recycled paper. Overall, the process consists of four stages, beginning with making pulp and ending with the recycled paper. First of all, used paper is dropped by convey belt into a tank which containing water and chemicals where paper is changed into pulp. Next, in the filtering process, the pulp is filtered by putting it into a barrel with holes in order to separate water from pulp. In the next stage, filtered bulb is put in a tank which is contained water and soap, during this process air is passed through tank by an air pump and ink gets removed. Following this, the clean pulp is rolled and heated by heat roller and waste water is removed. Finally, the recycled paper is obtained.
The diagram illustrates how
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used
paper is
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recycled
and
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change
into
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recycled
paper.

Overall
, the process consists of four stages, beginning with making pulp and ending with the
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recycled
paper.

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First of all
,
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used
paper
is dropped
by convey belt into a tank which containing
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water
and chemicals where paper is
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changed
into pulp.
Next
, in the filtering process, the pulp
is filtered
by putting it into a barrel with holes in order to separate
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water
from pulp.

In the
next
stage, filtered bulb
is put
in a tank which
is contained
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water
and soap, during this process air
is passed
through tank by an air pump and ink
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gets
removed. Following this, the clean pulp
is rolled
and heated by heat roller and waste
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water
is removed
.
Finally
, the
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recycled
paper
is obtained
.
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IELTS academic The diagram represents the process of recycling used paper.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
134 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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