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The diagram illustrates how an Australian town adopted a rainwater harvesting system.

The diagram illustrates how an Australian town adopted a rainwater harvesting system. L3krG
The diagram given is a demonstration of the way which Australian state use to collect rainwater and make it drinkable. Overall, the process involves three main steps: filtter, storge and treatment water by adding chemicals to make water fit to drinking. This process needs tubes, drans, tank, chemiacal material. Initially, the rain start and fall on the roof of houses then moving to the pipes by drains which jouned whith homes. Next, the rainwater was filtered from imparities. agter that passing through the channels to storge in the tank. The next stage, the water need treatment by using chemicals. Ultimately, the water treatment become fit to be drinking and transfer to the homes in Australian.
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is a demonstration of the way which Australian state
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collect rainwater and
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make
it drinkable.
Overall
, the process involves three main steps:
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filtter
,
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storge
and treatment
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water
by adding chemicals to
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make
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water
fit to drinking. This process needs tubes,
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drans
, tank,
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chemiacal
material.
Initially
, the rain
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start
and fall on the roof of
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houses
then moving to the pipes by drains which
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jouned
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whith
homes.
Next
, the rainwater
was filtered
from
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imparities
.
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agter
that passing through the channels to
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storge
in the tank. The
next
stage, the
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water
need treatment by using chemicals.
Ultimately
, the
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water
treatment become fit to be drinking and transfer to the homes in Australian.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how an Australian town adopted a rainwater harvesting system.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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