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The given line graph compares the percentage of total expenses in European countries over a 40-year period, starting from 1960.

The given line graph compares the percentage of total expenses in European countries over a 40-year period, starting from 1960. 70E5X
The given line graph compares the percentage of total expenses in European countries over a 40-year period, starting from 1960. It is noticeable that the proportion of people spending money for food, leisure, clothes and fuel decreased, the opposite was true for transport over a period shown. We can also see the most considerable decline in the food sector. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that around under 35% of people buy food, compared to about 10% of Europeans spending money for clothing and transport, whereas the percentage of people buying fuel and leisure were over 5% and under 20% respectively in 1960. By 1980, there was a significant drop in the proportion of people using money for food to under 25%, while those for leisure, clothing and energy went down slightly, at around 15%, 6% and 4% respectively. In the other word, the number of people using money for transportation rose steadily. In the year 2000, the percentage of European people purchasing food hit a low to under 15% and those buying clothes, fuel and leisure kept decreasing light. By contrast, the proportion of people using money for transportation reached a peak of 15%.
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line graph compares the percentage of total expenses in European countries over a 40-year period, starting from 1960.

It is noticeable that the proportion of
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people
spending
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money
for
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food
,
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leisure
, clothes and fuel decreased, the opposite was true for transport over a period shown. We can
also
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the most considerable decline in the
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food
sector.

Looking at the information in more detail, we can
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see
that around under 35% of
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people
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food
, compared to about 10% of Europeans spending
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money
for clothing and transport, whereas the percentage of
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people
buying fuel and
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leisure
were over 5% and under 20%
respectively
in 1960. By 1980, there was a significant drop in the proportion of
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people
using
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money
for
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food
to under 25%, while those for
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leisure
, clothing and energy went down
slightly
, at around 15%, 6% and 4%
respectively
. In the other word, the number of
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people
using
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money
for transportation rose
steadily
.

In the year 2000, the percentage of European
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people
purchasing
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food
hit a low to under 15% and those buying clothes, fuel and
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leisure
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decreasing light. By contrast, the proportion of
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using
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for transportation reached a peak of 15%.
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IELTS academic The given line graph compares the percentage of total expenses in European countries over a 40-year period, starting from 1960.

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