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The table and chart provide information about unemployment and owning a home in selected European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The clustered chart represents the correlation between home-ownership and employment status in several European countries in 2015. The table following the chart depicts the rate of citizens of the same countries who wish to own a home in 2005 and 2015. It can be inferred from the chart that a higher percentage of home ownership tends to be accompanied by a higher rate of unemployment. Switzerland and Germany are the two nations that had the lowest rates of home-owners, and they had the unemployment rate of only 3 to 5 percent. There are more people living in Denmark, Sweden and France who own their houses, making up to around 68 percent of the entire population. However, the employment situation in these countries was significantly more critical, as the proportion of jobless individuals fell between 6 to 10 percent. The same reality can also be observed in Italy and Belgium. The attitude of European citizens towards owning a house was somewhat divided. In 2015, there were fewer people living in Switzerland, Austria, Germany and Belgium who reported that they wanted to possess their own home, in comparison to the previous decade. Meanwhile, in France, England and Italy, a five percent increase in the number of people desiring to have their name on the lease was noted.
The clustered chart represents the correlation between home-ownership and employment status in several European countries in 2015. The table following the chart depicts the
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of citizens of the same countries who wish to
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a home in 2005 and 2015.

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be accompanied
by a higher
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rate
of unemployment. Switzerland and Germany are the two nations that had the lowest
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rates
of home-owners, and they had the unemployment
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3 to 5
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. There are more
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living in Denmark, Sweden and France who
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houses
, making up to around 68
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of the entire population.
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, the employment situation in these countries was
significantly
more critical, as the proportion of jobless individuals fell
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. The same reality can
also
be observed
in Italy and Belgium.

The attitude of European citizens towards owning a
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house
was somewhat divided. In 2015, there were fewer
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people
living in Switzerland, Austria, Germany and Belgium who reported that they wanted to possess their
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own
home,
in comparison
to the previous decade. Meanwhile, in France, England and Italy, a five
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percent
increase in the number of
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people
desiring to have their name on the lease
was noted
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IELTS academic The table and chart provide information about unemployment and owning a home in selected European countries.

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