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The graph shows changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years.

The graph shows changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years. lRxxD
The given line chart presents information on the amount of average fish catches in 2 countries – Canada and United States - during a span of 1972 and 1998. During 26 years, despite a fall in regular fish catches from 5. 4 metric tons in 1987 to 4. 1 metric tons in 1989, the United Kingdom remained the biggest of fish catches among 2 countries. Though Canada remained lowest, its ordinary fish catches from 1 metric ton in 1972 to 0. 6 metric tons in 1998. From 1972 to 1987, the United States caught a slight rise to about 3 metric ton. Thereafter it decreased till 1998. Fish catches in Canada reduce steadily throughout 26 year from 1 metric tons to 0. 5 metric tons. It is also evident from the chart that while the U. S accounted for 2. 6 percent of that of Canada in 1972, the distance increased and the United States accounted for about 3. 3 percent that of Canada catches in 1998. Overall while Canada witnessed fall average fish catches during 26 years, the United States witnessed considerable increase in fish catches.
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line chart presents information on the amount of average fish
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catches
in 2 countries
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Canada and
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States
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during a span of 1972 and 1998.

During 26 years, despite a fall in regular fish
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catches
from 5. 4 metric tons in 1987 to 4. 1 metric tons in 1989, the
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United
Kingdom remained the biggest of fish
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catches
among 2 countries. Though Canada remained lowest, its ordinary fish
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catches
from 1 metric ton in 1972 to 0. 6 metric tons in 1998.

From 1972 to 1987, the
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United
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States
caught a slight rise to about 3 metric ton.
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Thereafter
it decreased till 1998. Fish
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catches
in Canada
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reduce
steadily
throughout 26 year from 1 metric tons to 0. 5 metric tons.

It is
also
evident from the chart that while the U. S accounted for 2. 6 percent of that of Canada in 1972, the distance increased and the
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United
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States
accounted for about 3. 3 percent that of Canada
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catches
in 1998.

Overall
while Canada witnessed fall average fish
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catches
during 26 years, the
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United
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States
witnessed considerable increase in fish
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catches
.
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