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The map shows two proposed locations of a new restaurant in the city of Paris Overall, the River Seine runs from east to west aross the center of the map with various tourist Location 1, in near the Right Bank it has a view of the river with the Eiffel Tower in the background and a park. On the North side of park is the Maritime Museum which attracts 8000 visitors each day, on the East side is the Aquarium with 2000 visitors each day Location 2, on the left Bank is between the Eiffel Tower and Art Gallery where tourists visit is 16, 750. The sports center is alsso quite close to the number of visitors 500 each day. It also has a view of the river and park. Opening a restaurant at location 2 have more potential with a total of 17, 250 visitors from the Eiffel Tower, Art Gallery togerther with Sports Center
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two proposed locations of a new restaurant in the city of Paris

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, the River Seine runs from east to west
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the center of the map with various tourist

Location 1, in near the Right Bank it has a view of the river with the Eiffel Tower in the background and a park. On the North side of park is the Maritime Museum which attracts 8000
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visitors
each day, on the East side is the Aquarium with 2000
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each
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Location 2, on the
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Bank is between the Eiffel Tower and Art Gallery where tourists visit is 16, 750. The sports center is
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quite close to the number of
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visitors
500 each day. It
also
has a view of the river and park.

Opening a restaurant at location 2 have more potential with a total of 17, 250
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from the Eiffel Tower, Art Gallery
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with Sports Center
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